By
Lampdog
Mon Oct 09, 2017 7:36 pm
Overall.
I don't like the voice that plays behind your vocals. It leaves listeners trying to figure out what that background voice is saying more than what's being said in front (the actual emcee) with the music. That voice would work better in a chorus than along with the lyrics imo. 50 cent in the chorus, it's a mismatch imo. I think you could have picked a better even more melodic chorus piece.
Quality.
The quality of sound, crispness, mids and bass is good. Nice eq going on there. It is not muddy. Barely any frequencies fighting over each other (upper bass and lower mid do the tango just a little but it's fine).
Lyrics.
The delivery is cool. It fits with the mood of the beat. It FITS. Like really nicely. Not loud, not overriding the beat, fits!
Beat.
I like the feel of it. Smooth and easy. It's not trying to accomplish too much but at the same time it's doing it's own thang and chillin. I like it.
I SEE where you are trying to go and what your trying to do though. Keep it up!
Stop getting automatically offended when you see gold letters!
