Deep throat at Zedzz

Made a new track. Kind of jazzy techno.
Give it a listen at Zed's. http://zed.cbc.ca/go.ZeD?POS=1&CONTENT_ ... agepassage

wheres the option, ran to the toliet and puked









im messin with u. i liked it. i voted for head noddin.

ok listening .. building up, nice ride .. ok arangement, find the organs to be a bit week, defenatly has a st german vibe in there somewhere especially w the arrangement, okok nice sax.. but what no more .. u need to work that sax in there chop chop make new lines with it and throw it all over the mix .. the song really needs a lot more drive&hook, production needs more punch, you need to break it up with another theme and splice it in, this is to much more like a demo,.. like the vibe but its not punching nor hitting though like a hot track.. sorry but I hope you apreciate my honesty wich is like you know based on my own taste.

the beat is good the sax is nice I just can't stand the dull organ stabb.. okok I'll sut the f up now.. I'm an ass for posting

Okok, thx dude.
There's no organ! Only Rhodes, bass, drum and sax.
Thx for your honest feedback. Highly appreciated. Okok.

So what you're saying, it needs good mastering and then song is good?

Right now its more like a demo. I made it yesterday within a few hours. I uploaded it to get some feedback.

Track has been updated.
Still same link.

"So what you're saying, it needs good mastering and then song is good?

r u pulling a fast one on me here ;)


listening to the update .. got a 303 line in there now and some reso filter on the rhodes and some atmospherick lines .. this is much better .. the snare needs to get bussier on some partters, how about some guitar, bring the 303line back at some point and prheaps add some kind of a vocal phrase/hook (like" u know wr funky baby") and the mix needs work too.. okok:)