Critic my new song constucted with MPC 500

Girl 6 by Marc Dollarz
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GEqmYfF5i7E

Untouchable Produced by Marc Dollarz feat. Unique and Gates
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8CEz5ito_2k


Thanks for any all feedback.
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second trak had nice rap and good voice.

In regards to the beat, i think u need to use better samples for ur drums they sound abit thin and low quality. other than that ur doin well.

The second one is all out of key/tune, the rap was cool tho. You need to open your ears a little though on the musical side of things, it comes in time and it makes a huge difference to the overall impression if everything is as it should be.

my 2c

They honestly sound like they were made on software. Honestly, if that is the sound you are going for...why not just go with software? Those type of beats are definitely more suited to that kind of thing.

Is the 500 really aiding you in your production?

Thanks for all the feedback, very constructive. I appreciate you guys taking the time to critique my work.

-Marc Dollarz

why did you make 2 diff names?

i feel the raps, but the beats is kinda lacking, theres some parts that caught my ear, but keep at it homie.

I'm diggin the 1st video... eye candy galore! but I really dig the 2nd track...I like that outta tune shit, it's raw...I think hip hop is good outta tune... it's the cool thing about hip hop, anything goes sometimes! I woulda did some things diff with the strings n drums, lil attack n decay on those strings woulda been ill to blend em better, lil compression on the drums ect, overall tho u on to sumfin!

Thanks for all the feedback.

Datz first song iz crack...i like da concept to the 2nd video but i dont like da beat....

anyway check out all my songs at:

myspace.com/sixthboromusik

I have to agree, your lyrics are BOMB but the beat needs work...
Little more UMPH!!!! but your on the right track...
but before you accept my constructive critizism i will need to get your approval on my tracks
http://www.myspace.com/easytofindmymusic

it sounds real good prod.vice... but scince u want constructive criticism... the voice sounds good in itself, but the produ makes it sound a bit to muffled imo. thats my only complaint other than that.. . keep up the good work mate

I appreciate the feedback, if i gave up the accapellas to the songs would any of you guys be interested in remixes my songs.

Marc Dollarz
http://www.marcdollarzmusic.com