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cut out
Thu Oct 07, 2004 9:52 am
i think this is pretty cool - the music suits the vocal real well and the dragging feel to the drums is well-timed. unfortunately i'm listening to it at work on some cheap as hell monitor speakers so i can't hear the full-spectrum of frequencies, but I would say that the crash you've used is a bit too loud (and too frequent) - you could benefit from processing it to get a couple of different sounding one's to get some variation in the sound and then bringing the volume down a bit. but given that you knocked this out for fun it's pretty hot.