when you make a track, most of the time you will feel your own stuff, as would anybody, but when you post on here, cats will give you honest opinions, these are the type of cats that you would be making music for, so jus take what they say and see if it can benifit
about the track,
i think you got some str8 ideas, but some of the sounds seem a little too casio to be trying to sell just yet, you jus started right?
there is really nothing to say but keep practicing, no one started out making heat, nor does everyone feel your stuff even after a while of making tracks
it's like you got the skeleton of the track, what cats on here are telling you are the background stuff that will wake your joints up, don't take this stuff personal when cats give tips, jus use what you can, if you don't feel you can use it, there is no reason to post
most of the time an outside ear will pick up on stuff you miss
jus keep workin at it and you'll eventually see what cats is tryin to say, prolly a couple months to a year or more, when you listen to these tracks and compare to what you are doing at the time then you will realize
but if you jus tryin to hustle,and cats out there is buying.........................................................................................................you really aint gone hear what cats is sayin
grace