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By Lampdog Tue Jan 19, 2021 9:32 pm
Sounds, good.

I put the soundcloud tag on it so it shows up in the post. Just hit quote to see how I did it.
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By NearTao Tue Jan 19, 2021 9:44 pm
Quick Notes
* Good selection of drums and instruments... You've got some great building blocks
* This feels like a solid 2 minute track that you tried to turn into a 5 minute DJ track
* If you're going to go this length it becomes more important to really mix things up more... a filter sweep, riser, heavy crash... drum pattern change up
* Could be me, but the vocal feels out of sync with the music... I think some chopping, warping, something... could help out... it's just not on the up or down beat enough
* Along with the vocals... the drums feel too robotic... which I think is why it doesn't gel... might be good to play drums to vocals? *shrug*

Anyways... I do dig the vibe of the track... keep at it!