Hybrid - Samples and Keys! Feedback needed!

What's up fam! I did this one by chopping up a break and using keys for bass and melody! Check it out and let me know what U think. Peace!

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3 ... 69127&q=Hi

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3 ... 69127&q=Lo

sup louey, the melody and the drums are tight...it sounds like the bass throws it off tho, like it sounds like it wanna be in a different key...change tha bass and i think u good...oh yeah a few effects too prolly should be there

Thanks for the feed phaze!