*Re-Done*Radio....Suckas never play me!

What up all, I re-did the hook and re-played the piano chords let me know what y'all think!

The song is called "Get It Done" f/ Big Marc

click the link in the signature

i like the track,but i dont think they spin this on the freq..
u know the game..
one borgoe

what up james...to be honest i dont even know what the radio is playin now..im mad outta touch with that. so i cant tell you really. but i can tell you the track is nice...your verse is real tight man...but that hook, definitely needs to go. at least in my opinion, it sounds really outta place. but the beat is crazy, as well as your verse..maybe replace that 'we can get it done' part.

I like the beat, but the melodic parts are way too dissonant for me.

Right on fellas, I appreciate the feedback yeah I admit the "We Can Get I Done" part of the hook needs some work. Just tryin to broaden my horizons a little ya dig. Thanks again Cyborgoe, Fluent and Digi! Digi, I see what you meant about the melodies being out of harmony it was 3 o'clock in the morning when I did this joint .I went back and shifted the keys up an octave manually and added a chorus + reverb effect from the ASR to it. Once I fix the hook I will re-post it thanks for that ear man!
Peace,
D. James

check my thread for free airplay. i wasn't sure until the verse came in but i like it..get at about what you want on the air today.

what gear did you use on this??

heres the link for the radio..
http://www.mpc-forums.com/viewtopic.php ... highlight=

Incureable, thanks man I'm going to do some more with the hook and thanks to Digi's ear I had to shift the chords but as soon as I get thru messing with it I'll re-post it. Good looking on the radio show man I love this FORUM!!

Digi, holla at me let me know if it sounds better.

Yeah, now it sounds alot better. I could only listen for a bit over 2 minutes though, are soundclick updating their statistics or something?

I like the new hook alot better too!

sounds fresher..
like it djames..
yo can u send me the accapella of the truth and cons than i can work that track out..
one borgoe

i like this one better too man, for real...fresh man...damn, speakin of acapellas...you should hook me up man ...id build around whatever you want to send if you are down, especially this track right here yo...let me know what u think

this is pretty dope, not sure if it would play on the radio, but thats not a bad thing