da dada da daaaaaaaaa, another beat, come check it out

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/mattmedeirosmusic.htm

listen, i know it may not be much, but this is a big step for me, as you can see by my other beats, or sad attempts at beats.

all you hear in this mixdown is the main loop, the intro and hooks, midtros and outtros and 2nd verse isn't presetn, only cause this is an example, and its its not worth finishing, then i aint gunna waste anymor etime on it, i'll just start back at sampling

also, i wrote my verses on it, i was feelin it, i couldn't help it, i just had to, now the vocals are a little high, but with mixing, alot of these problems can be fixed.

so if you gunna check it out, at least stay for the 2 verses. all and any feedback is appreaciated. called "2 verse mixdown"

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/mattmedeirosmusic.htm

peace

yo i aint a dre or anything but you gotta start somewhere. i'll tell you this you'd be suprised at how other people perceive you're beats you my think they ain't much but somebody else may feel em like that i think they were straight but i didn't like that second one,if you want my opinion you could make something nice out of that second beat if you add better kicks to it just my opinion but don't get down on you're self everything has to start somewhere and to me you ain't started that bad.

yea that sht was hard. really good beat and was pleasantly surprised with your rhymin. you're truthfully the best mc i've heard on this forum. heading in a good direction. just wondering, where are you from?

yo mans thanks alot, i appreaciate it

anyways, i sort of am in need of feedback, should i finish the beat or just start over

UPDATE, beat is finished. the final will be posted in a few days, or hours depending on my work ethic ... LOOK --->

http://www.mpc-forums.com/viewtopic.php?p=125749#125749