https://www.facebook.com/video.php?v=13 ... =2&theater
any critique or advise would be much appreciated, just trying to improve
By Celticbeatz
Wed Dec 17, 2014 8:51 pm
By Fanu
Thu Dec 18, 2014 7:59 pm
Sometimes all it takes is a good, simple beat and a simple bassline.
http://instagram.com/p/wwo0m6C8lg/?modal=true
http://instagram.com/p/wwo0m6C8lg/?modal=true
By pituchez
Thu Dec 18, 2014 8:46 pm
you are right fanu
i suck!
i suck!
By pituchez
Fri Dec 19, 2014 6:31 pm
iron leg..diggin your beat a bit..but some of the chops sound like they are scratched instead of chopped..tahts just me anyways..nice beat
quaker not bad..
a bit to "trappish" for me..but if thats what u was going for..then its a good beat
anyways
here is mine..tell me what you think and give me some god damned feedback on what you think i can fix..
dont hold back..keep it honest shunz
quaker not bad..
a bit to "trappish" for me..but if thats what u was going for..then its a good beat
anyways
here is mine..tell me what you think and give me some god damned feedback on what you think i can fix..
dont hold back..keep it honest shunz
By Celticbeatz
Fri Dec 19, 2014 6:44 pm
Would u have any feed back on my beat... Need some help from fellow users to put in right direction
By Iron Leg
Fri Dec 19, 2014 8:02 pm
the sample is ok but maybe try and experiment with the 16 levels the main chop is used too much for me to the point it would drive me mad you maybe need to let it breath a bit. hope this helps.
al used a reggae sample on this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IlaXIYcSvA
it may not be your thing but you can certainly gain some info from the loops and chops used.
al used a reggae sample on this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8IlaXIYcSvA
it may not be your thing but you can certainly gain some info from the loops and chops used.
By Celticbeatz
Fri Dec 19, 2014 10:35 pm
Thank u man... Will check it out I apprciate the advise
By pituchez
Sat Dec 20, 2014 12:48 am
yeh
lots of bastards been telling me i shoul let the samples sound more..
so i did that on this one
tell me what yall think
thanks! whodie whooo
lots of bastards been telling me i shoul let the samples sound more..
so i did that on this one
tell me what yall think
thanks! whodie whooo

By DJ Hellfire
Sat Dec 20, 2014 2:09 am
Wow, this is actually some fire! Have to say I'm surprised. Only thing is that low bass note sounds off key. Needs to go a little lower. Dope strings and dope drums!

By DJ Hellfire
Sat Dec 20, 2014 2:10 am
pituchez wrote:iron leg..diggin your beat a bit..but some of the chops sound like they are scratched instead of chopped..tahts just me anyways..nice beat
quaker not bad..
a bit to "trappish" for me..but if thats what u was going for..then its a good beat
anyways
here is mine..tell me what you think and give me some god damned feedback on what you think i can fix..
dont hold back..keep it honest shunz
This has a lot of potential. Sample is way too off beat though! Needs to be more aligned with the drum timing! Dope sample and drums tho! The sound that comes in at 50 seconds is way off key and does nothing for the beat. I would just remove it.

By DJ Hellfire
Sat Dec 20, 2014 2:14 am
Iron Leg wrote:[youtube]bjdH-ywzFpQ[youtube]
made on the Ren.
This is NICE! If I had to critique anything, it would only be that the sample is too loud over the drums. But that could have been what you were after. Dope regardless!
By pituchez
Sat Dec 20, 2014 5:17 am
bwahhahaha!
finally someone whos sold some beats and is well known in teh forumz and youtubs..
no disrespekt to everyone else who has contributed feedback. i take it all seriously and try to learn and get better.
so your saying i should make the bass even deeper?
also thanks..i dont like that beat..it sucks. bwahahha. im gona keep on trying and trying and trying until i make some heat. but thanks. that means a lot man. means im headed in the right direction.
also the one with guitar. i dont use the metronome. i dont knwo how to play using it. im pretty much learning everything through this site or some youtube videos.
thanks a lot mane!
this is a new new that i just made using the metronome..
so its pretty simple
most of it was made using mpc expansions
finally someone whos sold some beats and is well known in teh forumz and youtubs..
no disrespekt to everyone else who has contributed feedback. i take it all seriously and try to learn and get better.
so your saying i should make the bass even deeper?
also thanks..i dont like that beat..it sucks. bwahahha. im gona keep on trying and trying and trying until i make some heat. but thanks. that means a lot man. means im headed in the right direction.
also the one with guitar. i dont use the metronome. i dont knwo how to play using it. im pretty much learning everything through this site or some youtube videos.
thanks a lot mane!
this is a new new that i just made using the metronome..
so its pretty simple
most of it was made using mpc expansions


