Any Of These Songs Good Enough For A Local Mixtape Persay?

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Kyle is that you in your avatar? i read some of your other post and saw you get bashed, but remember that this thing doesnt happen over nite. i havent listened to your work yet but practice makes perfect not everyone is born to spit or produce but with hard work it will seem that you were born to do what ever. now as for the mixtape, PUT IT OUT, force folk to listen to it, like it or whatever. notice 90% of the shit on the radio is forced down the listeners throat, but if you are truly not ready take a year to perfect your craft, remember your first impression is your last impression! you will always be remembered as that kid that was wack! think about it!

shit ain tbad at all. the beats are nice. the vocals could use a little eqing and better mixing. lyrics aint htat bad. i really am diggin that you already know track. i like the hook. shit i s fresh as hell. aight peace god keep up the hustle and keep me informed of releases and new joints./ aight peace god

garbage

I cant understand how mans can cuss a begginers beats...like you were born with the ability to make some deep beats...dont forget you had to learn the trade too!

I aint listened to the beats yet...will check em when i get home...

but im sure a bit a few tips or some constructive criticism would help my man a lot more than just saying 'garbage'

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its not bad or good. it just takes time. there is potential. the beats are just looped and the lyrics and flow could use some practice. its not bad at all. just can tell that you are just starting out. let me know if you have any specific questions.